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Completely ignored by society
It's amazing what I found
When I gained the courage
Just to mutter a 'hello'
I find it best if you know
That what I say is only the truth
My non-beating heart
Jerks to life when I see you
Your the first person I think of
When I wake in the morning
And the last I picture
When I fall asleep
Sometimes I wonder how long
It will last
Between us
But I know that when my heart beats
It's last few beats
I'll think of you and how you made me
Smile
In my world of Hatred
My Heart that had been broken by many people
Is slowly being sewn back into one piece
Coated in flames of Passion
©2009 ~PhycoKiller
:iconphycokiller:

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ATTENTION!!! this poem is for my BF and if this is stolen in any way i WILL hunt YOU down AND FUCKEN KILL YOU!! GOT IT???

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:iconzelyn-chan:
beautiful job!!

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:heart: 2.12.09-- Simply Unstoppable***
.:'-':.You've done all the things that could kill you somehow and you're so far down, But you will survive it somehow because life starts now.:'-':.
10/10/08--R.I.P, forever in our hearts.
:iconphycokiller:
Thank you ^_^ nice to know someone loves my work...

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When you see my face I hope it gives you hell, I hope it gives you hell
When you walk my way I hope it gives you, I hope it gives you hell
When that's worth a damn and treats you well, then he's a fool, you are as well
:iconartificialheartache:
holy shit. I'll be sure not to steal anything from you. Nice work though. I usually don't like lovey crap.

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And this is who I am when, when I don't know myself anymore.
And this is how it looks when I am standing on the edge. And this is how I break apart when I finally hit the ground. And this is how it hurts when I, pretend I don't feel any pain.
:iconphycokiller:
I only wrote it cause my BF wrote me 2 poems T_T and he said I was talented after he read it ^_^

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When you see my face I hope it gives you hell, I hope it gives you hell
When you walk my way I hope it gives you, I hope it gives you hell
When that's worth a damn and treats you well, then he's a fool, you are as well
:iconartificialheartache:
Awwww....

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And this is who I am when, when I don't know myself anymore.
And this is how it looks when I am standing on the edge. And this is how I break apart when I finally hit the ground. And this is how it hurts when I, pretend I don't feel any pain.
:iconphycokiller:
yea but I said I wasn't and that it was a one time thing....

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When you see my face I hope it gives you hell, I hope it gives you hell
When you walk my way I hope it gives you, I hope it gives you hell
When that's worth a damn and treats you well, then he's a fool, you are as well
:iconartificialheartache:
v_v

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And this is who I am when, when I don't know myself anymore.
And this is how it looks when I am standing on the edge. And this is how I break apart when I finally hit the ground. And this is how it hurts when I, pretend I don't feel any pain.
:iconphycokiller:
wat?

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When you see my face I hope it gives you hell, I hope it gives you hell
When you walk my way I hope it gives you, I hope it gives you hell
When that's worth a damn and treats you well, then he's a fool, you are as well
:iconartificialheartache:
do not deny the truth it's rightful place in exsistance!

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And this is who I am when, when I don't know myself anymore.
And this is how it looks when I am standing on the edge. And this is how I break apart when I finally hit the ground. And this is how it hurts when I, pretend I don't feel any pain.
:iconphycokiller:
x]] yea it has a place...as far away from exsistance...as possible....I'll just stick to writing stories and taking pics...should I post a pic of myself on here??

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When you see my face I hope it gives you hell, I hope it gives you hell
When you walk my way I hope it gives you, I hope it gives you hell
When that's worth a damn and treats you well, then he's a fool, you are as well

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